IT CAME!! My advisor (may he live forever) used words like "delight" and "engaging." Alas, he also used phrases such as "needs to be more explicit" and "you must work at the writing of simple, straight-forward sentences." (laughter) Um, yes, this would be very true.
More explicit - I can do that. Clean up my citations - I should do that. Get this back to him by the end of the month - well, I hope so!
All hail Wilfred of York.
Words Written: zero
Lessons Graded: twelve (and lots more to go)